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Saturday, December 02, 2006A poemKind of sad/self-analytical. I wrote it over a few days adding lines at sporadic moments of interest. Havn't been able to commit anything of worth to audio documentation in the last week so I decided to post this.What Am I? A timely conduit for inspiration.
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I think it would be stronger if you shortened it to only your favorite phrases and the most important ones. My personal favorite is "hobby of protein."
there are some really great descriptions in here. i really like "Four or five breaths short of panic" and "Going to hell." funny but serious, it's good.
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